Night Mistress

I feel like i am going to give up because i am tired of writing second grade work. I feel so stupid for posting such mediocre work, that i feel ...

alright. thanks, Gahks.

alright, thanks for the help, Rosey.

please help me.

in my latest story, The Elemental Gem, I start off in the prologue with a old woman and little girl. the little girl is asking her grandma to tell her ...

I really don't like writing a mutliple first person, because i am the one who get confused so it probably better if i can keep it in third pov.

alright.

1- Would you read this? 2- Do you see any little annoying things here that are unrealistic and/or cliched? 3- Which of the plot points that are fuzzy do you ...

that's why i need to ask.

well, one of my MC is telling the story to her children and as she tells the story, It goes back 50 year into the past. But i can't keep ...

please, help me.

When you are writing as a back flash, do you go from third pov to a first pov or could you just keep it as a third pov?

if you guys have any more info for me, please feel free to post or pm me about it.

thanks for all of your advice, guys.

I know it's not. I like fantasy. it's so hard choose a section to put this in.